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Turning Life .......... |
Those we love don’t go away,
They walk beside us everyday…….
They walk beside us everyday…….
Unseen, unheard but always near,
Still missed, still loved & very dear………
We say life is moving,
& bending in circles…..
No matter how it tilts,
& tackling in hurdles ………
We count big success,
& forget our failures ………
We may pan out when we fail,
& come off with flying colors ………..
We say life is to love,
To joy & to zeal ……..
Those who makes us happy,
We forget them to heal ……….
If beggar is begging,
To live open & pudder ……..
People cheat others,
& making thyself a beggar ………
We know time is changing,
Still our life is same ……..
We need food & water to live n stay,
Few get easily and few lost shame ………
They hold us till they breathe ……..
Why some people walk away?
When our creators are in need ……….
We missed those days,
When we play and crawl …….
Time is changing badly,
Some going up and some facing downfall ……
I`d started with those,
We loved & stay away ………
But I do care all those,
Who are close & meets everyday ………..
Love
Jasmeet
you have written a fabulous poem. The message is conveyed to me in a single read and that is what I can ascribe as a good poem for a novice like me who is really bad at untangling the meaning out of some fancy words used in a poem. Again Kudos to your writing skills..n this is your best write up for me..:)
ReplyDeletethanks a lot Kapoor :)
DeleteHey even I write sometimes....but not as meaningful as u do...bt now even I am thinking to create a blogof my own and start something constructive rather than just making sense outta rhymes....
ReplyDeletebtw this is TPSM...
hey thks so much guys.....
ReplyDeleteTPSM : now m waiting this anonymous comment would turn to known name soon ........ good luck :)
Good to see you sharing your thoughts...keep on writing ..All the very best ..will be visiting this blog frequently..and i need every time something new .
ReplyDeletethanks Rishi .. now m a regular blogger :) hope u find some new stuff here
Deletewell said JasZ...so impressive and meaningful thought.. :)
ReplyDeleteohh yhan be Jasz..:) neways thanks for liking it
DeleteWell knitted thoughts...
ReplyDeletethanks a lot Anupam Sir :)
DeleteTrue Words ........ Keep writing girl ..ur poem is as beautiful as u are ...
ReplyDeleteok , now a message in the poem , awesome !!!!
ReplyDelete@ Rahul : yeah.. a message :)
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