Sep 11, 2011

What I want to be ……………

If  you wud ever ask to me, that what I really want to be ……
Then I will see up in the deep sky, so as I live and can fly high..
This is what I want to be & keen to fly up in the sea ……….....

fly and sing, so all can hear & see the wings ……

fly up to the sea, this is what I want to be ……………

sing & sit on the rock, feel as vain as a peacock …….
so get the colors as thee, this is what I want to be …….....


with green shiny eyes and cool color like an ice ……..
deep sizzling tweet, this is what I want to be ……………

do feel cheerful in drops of showers and so it brings  flowers ……
I wanna smell like thee , this is what I want to be ……………

sing a song & fly for the whole day long ……..
dark clouds as bee’s knee , this is what I want to be …………

sleep and rest , at my cozy & pretty nest ………
stay under the tree, this is what I want to be ……………

In front of the sun , when it dropped down at the sea …….
Sweet as the hymns of angels as me, this is what I want to be …………

Lv 
Jasmeet 

8 comments:

  1. amazing!!!!!!!

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  2. I want to feel the way you do feel,
    I want to sense the all you do sense,
    I want to brain my thoughts the way you think,
    I want to be with you as I Like You.....

    Sorry...jst in continuation...:)
    gr8...gr8 imagination!!

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  3. Very touching, and simple, lines, something that is not easy to do. Congratulations, Jasmeet, and keep writing.

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    1. i will strive in writing my best bt people comments n feedback would be the real motivation :)
      Thanks so much Subhorup for dropping by :)

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  4. imagination at its peak..beautifully written..clearly expressing that its the happiness you strive in life for..good job

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    1. thanks a lot Animesh for ur exclusive response :)
      this poetry was an impulsive creation of my thoughts........

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