
Then I will see up in the deep sky, so as I live and can fly high..
This is what I want to be & keen to fly up in the sea ……….....
fly and sing, so all can hear & see the wings ……
fly up to the sea, this is what I want to be ……………
sing & sit on the rock, feel as vain as a peacock …….
so get the colors as thee, this is what I want to be …….....
with green shiny eyes and cool color like an ice ……..
deep sizzling tweet, this is what I want to be ……………
do feel cheerful in drops of showers and so it brings flowers ……
I wanna smell like thee , this is what I want to be ……………
sing a song & fly for the whole day long ……..
dark clouds as bee’s knee , this is what I want to be …………
sleep and rest , at my cozy & pretty nest ………
stay under the tree, this is what I want to be ……………
In front of the sun , when it dropped down at the sea …….
Sweet as the hymns of angels as me, this is what I want to be …………
Lv
Jasmeet
amazing!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteI want to feel the way you do feel,
ReplyDeleteI want to sense the all you do sense,
I want to brain my thoughts the way you think,
I want to be with you as I Like You.....
Sorry...jst in continuation...:)
gr8...gr8 imagination!!
Thanks NK
DeleteVery touching, and simple, lines, something that is not easy to do. Congratulations, Jasmeet, and keep writing.
ReplyDeletei will strive in writing my best bt people comments n feedback would be the real motivation :)
DeleteThanks so much Subhorup for dropping by :)
imagination at its peak..beautifully written..clearly expressing that its the happiness you strive in life for..good job
ReplyDeletethanks a lot Animesh for ur exclusive response :)
Deletethis poetry was an impulsive creation of my thoughts........
Can I simply just say what a comfort to find a person that actually
ReplyDeleteknows what they're discussing online. You certainly know how to bring an issue to light and make it important.
More and more people must check this out and understand this side of your story.
It's surprising you're not more popular since you most certainly possess the gift.
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