The reason could be any,
If i lose or you lose,
what if someone loses before giving a birth.............
life is tough,
breathe in n out is easy,
no use if due to loss, birth loses its real worth.............
losses are not bad,
gives a way to things add,
no sense if you live life like a hell on the
earth…………
bring solely a change,
be the reason of smile,
someone forgets to cry and holds the genuine mirth……….
Forget the loss,
Come up with a thought,
life is only one and chances are nil of getting
rebirth………
Loss – “For some it is private and for many it is sharing,
For some it is an end but for many it’s a beginning,
With Adore,
Jasmeet
Words of wisdom indeed.
ReplyDeletethanks TF :)
DeleteLife is progression from one loss to another. In reality, what we gain are all virtual.
ReplyDeleteNice thought, penned unique.
yeah , indeed a progression in getting a strong hold to come out from losses ........
Deletethx for dropping by mate :)
to be true , one of the best poems i ve ever read /// ..
ReplyDelete@ Malay : Thank u for always reading my poems :)
DeleteIf i loss or you loss-? spelling mistake "lose"
ReplyDeleteloss is not bad,-> cud have used losing is not bad
but the feelings u wanted to convey were conveyed !
Thanks ! a lovely deep poem !
Oh yes..i dint noticed thru:) thanks for making it correct mate..thats we bloggers are here to correct and share with each other ..isn't :D
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