They live in the
hearts and will never grow old,
remembrance is the
state which unfolds!
some evade jauntily
and some may died,
the soul who’d protect,
shall always live with pride!
They endanger their
life to save from,
enemies who foment
the riot and fray!
torn those invaders using arrow,
sword & gun and scoop
them out far away!
They are fearless
lion and fast alike snake,
And do not cheat the country of given rights!
They can cut their throat
to make the country safe,
It’s all about passion, honor
and pride!
They versed thyself in the beauteous paradise,
will always be
remember at evening
sunset and sunrise!
Age shall not effete to hold their power,
immortal they will remain in saving the
world over!
With pride //Jasmeet
All Copyright reserved © JasmeetK
This post is part of the contest Ten words to a Story(or Poem).. on WriteUpCafe.com
Wow . Very aptly and wonderfully penned by a wonderful soul.
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DeleteThe best thing that i liked about this post is the way you have used all the words and yet created such a nice poem. Well done.
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